My first film as a director is out now, do check it out

[Bhavya]

I am sharing the link to the film here.
I hope you all like it and thanks in advance. 
Please share your thoughts, feedback and suggestions. 
There is more to come

You can rate the film on IMDB - [https://www.imdb.com/title/tt40371627/](https://www.imdb.com/title/tt40371627/) 
and also on Letterboxd - [https://letterboxd.com/film/beyond-the-pages/](https://letterboxd.com/film/beyond-the-pages/)



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[Advik]

I think the black screens are a bit too long, you could cut the video by a minute. The post credit scene seems a bit much for a short film. Using a generated voice is not that great, a normal deep voice would be more effective. The conversation was nice and had some awkward moments, the glasses were fine, but if you could show some books related to the context in any shot it would be more meaningful

[Rajesh]

This is nice, it reminded me of the parallel cinema from the 80s at first.

[Naresh]

thanks again, all the best